Several months ago, I had this comic criticized through request. It got bashed mainly because of the poor writing and some artistic flaws. It got a 4 out of 10. For me, the artist, I was only wanting to improve this by redoing the first 20 pages of comic. However, since the criticism was aimed at the writing, it was only up to the writer himself to redo that part. This is where the fate of this comic comes in. Ever since that helpful criticism, the writer seemed to be either too busy to rewrite the pages or interested in doing a new Naruto fan fiction. As for me, Ive recently decided to write my own story, which is very intriging, according to those who looked at the idea I posted on Creative Showcase in the forums. Neither of us want to work on this comic anymore, meaning it wont have new pages. Think of it as where we both started.